Well, I sent the first draft to the Editor. I don't think he's going to like it. He told me on the phone last night, he's looking for something dark. Okayyy, dark. How can I make my story darker? What's interesting is, I thought it would be harder to hear comments and critisisms. But it wasn't, my friend Jennifer was very helpful. Thanks, Jenn!! So, it's back to the story, to make it darker. I think I'll add the darkness and then take out the fluff when I edit it. I think I can do this. I'll let you know tomorrow/ next year. Hahahaha, sorry, bad pun......